Feedback from latest cut

What we have learnt:
In today's lesson, we asked a group of five people including our teacher to look at our latest cut to suggest things to improve and adjust. The image above vaguely displays their thoughts and I would say that the most important thing that the group pointed out was that the cuts needed to happen on the beat and not in random places or in-between a lyric. This is something that we have picked up on ourselves and will be altered during our next lesson. During our jump cut sections, the panel also inquired about a possible longer jump to each cut. At the moment, our intro includes clips that seem to repeat and this has been changed in a separate video and needs to be copied in. Also, the build-up to the chorus includes cuts that don't really jump at all where we have a long enough shot to jump more substantially. Overall, this quick feedback session has helped us massively because the group pointed out both things that we already knew needed to be improved, and things that we hadn't spotted ourselves. During our next lesson on Friday, we will go over each of the things pointed out by our audience and correct or improve them.